Once a Wizard, Always a Shinobi Ch 10

[taku_aiden]

Rating:: M (to be safe)

Warnings:: Slash/shounen ai (maybe YAOI), Het, blood and stuff, non-con (though I'll warn you so you can skip), mentions of underage (I guess) HarryOC (OC dies so don’t get in a twist) ShuraHaku (yes, he WILL be a HE)

Diclaimer:: I own it in the same way Napolean is only pretending to be dead.

Note:: Alrighty!! This chapter has

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[lynngryphon]

“You, my dearest Hajime-nii, are going to learn to cook something today or I’m going to carve out your kikai with a rusty shuriken.” The two Aburame men were slightly freaked out by how happy that thought made Shura.

I started chuckling out loud when I got to that. Thankfully the room was devoid of people so I missed any weird looks. Good length, nice characterization, and overall grammar is well done. If only more people wrote so nicely. I fully enjoyed the lemon, especially since Shura was on top and Koishi is 2yrs older(?). Plus Kiba calling him 'mommy' is cute.

Re: Review

[taku_aiden]

I'm glad you like it. I try to write well and spell things right since I don't have a beta and I go through all my chapters at least once before I post them ino rder to pick things up I might have missed. And yes, Koishi is abotu two years older. I need to update my timeline so people can see the ages easier, but I'm being lazy about it right now.

~Taku

[bunko_san]

Hehe, love the new chapter! I love the way things are going with Koishi and Shura.

ff.net?

[taku_aiden]

I'm glad you liked it! Do you read this on fanfiction.net as well?