Comments | takun_horo_horo: SAVOIR OF THE FALLEN....

takun_horo_horo

Mar 12, 2007 00:27

Im writing a story and i want you to tell me what you think of it so far ( Read more... )

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no_screamo_chix March 12 2007, 20:26:04 UTC

spelling
syntax
paragraphing
plot
grammar
punctuation

besides those things, its all good