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desirae333 May 16 2014, 23:12:29 UTC
Sorry for the late comment.

The plot thickens!! I am so excited for Opal and Daniel's baby to be born but I really want to know if this Formetia is as evil as I suspect or not. Her comment about the team not coming back REALLY upsets me.

Hoping that things work out! My hear it already aching.

Great chapter, as always.

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tale_legacy May 16 2014, 23:22:48 UTC
It's fine. Sorry for the late post XD

Indeed it does :D I know it happens incredibly fast, and I hope to make it a little clearer in the next chap. But YES I am so ready for babies again!

Don't worry...to much. Thank you :D

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renderedpixels May 17 2014, 16:39:43 UTC
Fuck. Daniel and Opal are so cute together <3
they will have beautiful children, fer shure.

Oh sky, I'm glad she found happiness in Stefan…he better not fuckin die or something… *eyes you suspiciously*

ughguhgufhghghgh the feels. Don't go daniel! ufhduhfdhuhdlskjdkfksmf
The moments between them are so full of emotion it's just- buh.

It's kind of weird seeing it from this perspective. Outside of the actual battle, but also very interesting. Looking at how awful it is, the waiting and everything.
DANNI! :D
Bless her. She and Quinn work so well together, I adore their dynamic ;]

Oh.These poor kids. Damn. They've all been through some shit.

NOOO WHAT THE FUCK. NOOO. WHAT I'M SO- WHY IS SHE HERE-
whah. No. Wait. I need to know MORE. What's going on? Is she a bitch? Why won't they come back? Why did he need to wait? WHAT?!!?!?

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roxmorgirl May 20 2014, 00:21:56 UTC
"I wondered when I had become an expert on love, but then maybe this was what best friends did."
^ "What, are you some kind of LOVE EXPERT, or something?" "No, but I have friends who are!"

Ok sorry but I really just had to quote Frozen there XD

Aaah but there is so much to comment on!!! First I will say that I really, really enjoyed this chapter! There was so much going on and all of it was so exciting and I think you wrote it really well!

Daniel and Opal are absolutely adorable together, first of all <3 Seriously, they're so cute! I can't wait to meet their baby and PLEASE bring Daniel home again because I absolutely could not take it if he died. Not to mention how Opal would feel about that ( ... )

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tyrfish May 24 2014, 13:11:04 UTC
ffs what is it with you and cliffhangers?!
"“Stand what? Quinn? Earplugs mostly."" heheh oh danni. That was a really lovely conversation, knowing where everyone came from and shizz.
I wanna see the bebe :P
It's really interesting to know where the Old Ones came from. I have to start thinking about mentioning your team at some point in SOL.
I wish RL didn't matter so I could have moaaaaar D:

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