First, this, "I had to change it recently due to events, but I’m hoping the story is just as strong and compelling." Sorry :( But I absolutely don't doubt for a second that the story will be fantastic. I can't wait for Calen to take over this wonderful legacy! <3
That first picture of Drakos is absolutely chilling... damn, he's scary. Haha! I really liked how you did Formetia's story and Opal realizing that she was looking for reasons to hate her.
And all of this new info!!! We finally understand why Opal and Alyssa have their eye powers and what the end goal of it all is! This is so interesting! I really, really love how you've done this, it is so intricate and awesome! The original vampire kids are pretty dang scary too. And was that some Jace backstory there?? Ooooh... Dang this is good! I couldn't keep this many plots straight in my head, I'm impressed you can write them all so well! <3
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I wrote out a nice long comment and then LJ and/or my internet fucked up. Thanks, internet. -.- Anyway, the basis of the comment was: great chapter, love quinn, love the story behind the eyes (gen 10 is gonna go out with a bang, I see), Drakos looks like the perfect demon (and by that I mean creepy as hell). Is Jace okay? Seems like he's recovered well but I wasn't sure... Oh and you keep saying Elite instead of Old Ones! Don't want to confuse people :P Quinn would be mental if the Elite were evil all along xD
what a heart wrenching chapter! I am so sad about all of this! Daniel's story and Formetia's too make me rethink how I thought about their whole relationship. I was shocked to know she was the mother of the Old Ones. No Hayden!! :( Poor Rose. I am so angry that someone had to go, and I can't imagine it was easy for Daniel to see that and not blame himself and now to live with that guilt. Most importantly though ... OMG Calen is absolutely 100% precious and I am SO excited to see that little man grow. Seriously! Such a good mix of his parents. Hope we get to see Rose's little one too! Excellent chapter as always! Looking forward to seeing where this next generation leads us!
I think you've just earned the evil story queen crown. Hands down. But that ending was so damn sweet, it almost makes up for it! I think I honestly could have cried with her when Daniel arrived home safely! I loved all the intricate little details, the way you just tied up the little loose ends and answered questions I didn't even know I had (like with the eyes!). Now, if you don't mind me, I'm going to go pass out from cute overload from cooing at Calen! Wonderful, WONDERFUL chapter my dear! I enjoyed every minute of it. MORE PLEASE! ^_^
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That first picture of Drakos is absolutely chilling... damn, he's scary. Haha! I really liked how you did Formetia's story and Opal realizing that she was looking for reasons to hate her.
And all of this new info!!! We finally understand why Opal and Alyssa have their eye powers and what the end goal of it all is! This is so interesting! I really, really love how you've done this, it is so intricate and awesome! The original vampire kids are pretty dang scary too. And was that some Jace backstory there?? Ooooh... Dang this is good! I couldn't keep this many plots straight in my head, I'm impressed you can write them all so well! <3 ( ... )
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Anyway, the basis of the comment was: great chapter, love quinn, love the story behind the eyes (gen 10 is gonna go out with a bang, I see), Drakos looks like the perfect demon (and by that I mean creepy as hell).
Is Jace okay? Seems like he's recovered well but I wasn't sure...
Oh and you keep saying Elite instead of Old Ones! Don't want to confuse people :P Quinn would be mental if the Elite were evil all along xD
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No Hayden!! :( Poor Rose. I am so angry that someone had to go, and I can't imagine it was easy for Daniel to see that and not blame himself and now to live with that guilt.
Most importantly though ... OMG Calen is absolutely 100% precious and I am SO excited to see that little man grow. Seriously! Such a good mix of his parents.
Hope we get to see Rose's little one too!
Excellent chapter as always! Looking forward to seeing where this next generation leads us!
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