Oof. Aw, Dana. :( I'll miss her, a lot. But I understand why you did what you did. And that was very noble of her.
Man, I know theoretically Chris is a good person and is being manipulated or whatever, but he just seems like a class A dickhead, and I'm sad that Darcy has feelings for someone like that. He's like the opposite of purity, haha!
Calen is so sweet <3 I loved when he opened up to Jace. And Jace is so awesome. Wow, I never realized how much I'd miss Quinn, but now he's gone from BOTH legacies, and it's really weird. Loved the little mention of Attie, by the way. :D
Great chapter as always! I really enjoyed the way you did it!! I can't wait to see what happens next.
I will miss her too, I never planned to get invested in her character but....couldn't help it in the end :(
It's a moral debate in regards to Chris isn't it? I'm glad you got the comparison, I tried to make Chris and Calen contrast but it's so damn hard when Chris' original personality was pure (minus the underage sex of course)
Jace is the best accidental important character ever, and I hope he doesn't seem overused :( It's hard not having Quinn, especially when even I don't know where he is!!
I am 100% okay with Chris being dead. He is a dick and I wanted him dead, whatever that would do to the rest of them. I'm sure at some point you told me about Dana, but the way it actually happened was different from what I'd been expecting. And shocking, too. Though I guess Calen is going to be a guilty mess because of this... sigh.. (writing Emily and Attica's guilt has made me really glad that Aktaion doesn't think the same way as them! Guilt can be really annoying.. maybe that's just me). I don't think the scene seemed short. I think it was the right length, actually. I get that things like this happen very quickly, but it didn't seem rushed. All in all, a very well done scene! I want to know what this document isssss.
So sorry I got behind on reading and commenting, your posts weren't showing up in my feed but I fixed it now so hopefully I'll be able to keep up! So sad that poor Calen lost Dana, but at least Chris is gone now. Dude had issues. I'd really like to know what's going on with Adrian and all that now, and see what happens next with Calen and Darcy.
i'm sorry you're still ill. I hope you get better soon x
psst, I really love Dana's new look. Dana is kinda like Hermione. Which automatically makes her more AWESOME
noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo dana what the fuck, man Ugh, god, she's so amazing and sad. Why did you do this. I WAS JUST TALKING ABOUT HOW COOL SHE IS damnit
Anyway, I hope Calen doesn't blame himself too much. And as much as Chris was a total prick (on that note; poor fucking Darcy- Dana AND Chris? ouch), he was obviously indoctrinated by somebody. Not trying to absolve him of blame, but also, fuck adrian.
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Man, I know theoretically Chris is a good person and is being manipulated or whatever, but he just seems like a class A dickhead, and I'm sad that Darcy has feelings for someone like that. He's like the opposite of purity, haha!
Calen is so sweet <3 I loved when he opened up to Jace. And Jace is so awesome. Wow, I never realized how much I'd miss Quinn, but now he's gone from BOTH legacies, and it's really weird. Loved the little mention of Attie, by the way. :D
Great chapter as always! I really enjoyed the way you did it!! I can't wait to see what happens next.
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It's a moral debate in regards to Chris isn't it? I'm glad you got the comparison, I tried to make Chris and Calen contrast but it's so damn hard when Chris' original personality was pure (minus the underage sex of course)
Jace is the best accidental important character ever, and I hope he doesn't seem overused :( It's hard not having Quinn, especially when even I don't know where he is!!
Thank you :)
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I'm sure at some point you told me about Dana, but the way it actually happened was different from what I'd been expecting. And shocking, too. Though I guess Calen is going to be a guilty mess because of this... sigh.. (writing Emily and Attica's guilt has made me really glad that Aktaion doesn't think the same way as them! Guilt can be really annoying.. maybe that's just me).
I don't think the scene seemed short. I think it was the right length, actually. I get that things like this happen very quickly, but it didn't seem rushed. All in all, a very well done scene!
I want to know what this document isssss.
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So sad that poor Calen lost Dana, but at least Chris is gone now. Dude had issues.
I'd really like to know what's going on with Adrian and all that now, and see what happens next with Calen and Darcy.
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psst, I really love Dana's new look.
Dana is kinda like Hermione. Which automatically makes her more AWESOME
noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
dana
what the fuck, man
Ugh, god, she's so amazing and sad. Why did you do this.
I WAS JUST TALKING ABOUT HOW COOL SHE IS
damnit
Anyway, I hope Calen doesn't blame himself too much. And as much as Chris was a total prick (on that note; poor fucking Darcy- Dana AND Chris? ouch), he was obviously indoctrinated by somebody. Not trying to absolve him of blame, but also, fuck adrian.
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