It was interesting see Arthur's first brush with Gwen with his memories back. And that scene with Merlin having to run as he does is quite heartbreaking. I forgot to mention in an earlier chapter that I think the way that Morgana and Arthur ended up having an incestous relationship was quite clever.
I think any reincarnation with Gwen and Arthur would be complicated--especially so in this universe that I'm writing, since she still left him for Lancelot.
Merlin--he took a left at complicated and just kept on going, poor guy.
Glad you thought the Arthur/Morgana was clever. :) I wanted to do it in a way that blurred the wrongness of it a bit and at least made it understandable. Might as well draw right from the original legend and have them not knowing what they're doing.
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I forgot to mention in an earlier chapter that I think the way that Morgana and Arthur ended up having an incestous relationship was quite clever.
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Merlin--he took a left at complicated and just kept on going, poor guy.
Glad you thought the Arthur/Morgana was clever. :) I wanted to do it in a way that blurred the wrongness of it a bit and at least made it understandable. Might as well draw right from the original legend and have them not knowing what they're doing.
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That's for sure!
Poor Merlin :(
(reading ch. 10)
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