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Gift of Exile, Part 1 Chapter 4

Jul 25, 2006 10:59

It was still early but Ennis had known the Black and Blue Eagle Bar would be busy. As he got out of his truck and watched David close the door of his anonymous-looking rental car, Ennis wondered how the hell he’d gotten into this: two men walking into the bar together and wearing suits at that. And one of "them….

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rhye July 25 2006, 17:25:16 UTC

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SLOW AND STEADY iamastarin2006 July 25 2006, 18:31:20 UTC

I love your story slow and steady so soft and sweet thank you.

Re: SLOW AND STEADY talkstocoyotes July 25 2006, 19:00:35 UTC

I would have taken the plot ahead faster, but Ennis wouldn't cooperate!

The going with writing it is slow - now I know why so many novelists have been drinkers.

Movin' Slow..... peggyz July 25 2006, 22:13:04 UTC

I like it slow. I don't want Ennis to just fall into bed with the first guy that looks his way. That's not Ennis. And that must be why he wasn't cooperating too much with you as you were writing! LOL

This is a lovely story and I look forward to more!

Thanks!!

ky77ccl July 26 2006, 01:43:50 UTC

What a pleasant, unexpected surprise to find your update.

My curiosity is so piqued (sp?) - why is David called Doctor? Who is Maggie?

I'm so glad Ennis got to curl up with Jack at the end of the day - that he didn't end the day lonely and sad and worried...

I can't imagine how horseback riding lessons are going to go, but I am looking forward to finding out.
=)
nB

joetheone July 26 2006, 04:08:49 UTC

Nice chapter with Ennis going to give riding lessons to this man. Well, hope the ride turns into more. Joe

Isn't it fun? julievognar July 27 2006, 02:56:47 UTC

Starting a new story? Especially the first. Hope the lessons go well...nice and easy going so far. Writing is fine and confident. Good luck!