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[talkstocoyotes]

The Gift of Exile

Source: Fanfiction based on Brokeback Mountain, slightly more influenced by the film than the short story.
Rating: mostly NC 17, some slash; a metaphysical subplot, which may bug some readers.
Summary: Faced with several unattractive choices, Ennis chooses self-imposed exile and discovers that exile can sometimes lead you to the

Comments

[rhye]

This is a lovely story so far. You capture emotional description well. Keep it up! *is off to next chapter*

[ky77ccl]

I'm so glad you let me know about your story. Your writing is really wonderful. You conveyed just the smallest amount of hope amidst a large amount of grief just perfectly. I look forward to reading more (however slow or fast the reading goes).
=)
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[morrobay1990]

well, I'm only 5 years too late to this one.

I like the start and how you paint a picture of his time spent, after Jack. Too late he learned that life is short, it's a hard lesson.

...carefully undoing the top snap just to have a reason to touch all he had left of Jack. Lovely.

Ghost? Hmmmm - off to chapter 2.

Thanks for reading!

[talkstocoyotes]

I admit to having what must be one of the longest-running WIPs around.

Ennis is headed for a lot of lessons, some of them quite unexpected. :-)