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talkstocoyotes

Chapter 19

Apr 12, 2007 09:55

When Ennis woke up at daybreak, the first thing he noticed about the room was that Jack was no longer there. The second was that although the bed was the most comfortable one he could remember sleeping in, the overpowering need to sleep had left him as abruptly as it had arrived. He lay for a moment, mentally stroking and examining the sound of ( Read more... )

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ifyoucantfixit1 April 12 2007, 23:47:58 UTC

They are both going to have to get used to being in the space, the other, occupies. Ennis never before being where the person he wanted, was living.
And such a long time that David had to talk, and soothe, and slow break, Ennis.The sexual tension is going to cause the air to be fraught with electricity...Holy god almighty, when they get together finally ,,,,POW..
janice

joetheone April 13 2007, 00:55:00 UTC

Hmm I have been waiting for more of this story and well you made me so happy when I turned on and found it again. I know how Ennis feels when I made a huge move in my life 12 years ago it was exhilirating and freightening all in the same breath and when it started out I got sort of sick and could not move myself for a whole week. This transition is difficult but being so near water and water is the force of life that sustains us all I think he will find great healing being here and well with someone as understanding and kind as David I think it will all be good. Thank you again for this update and making me smile. Joe

rainattimes April 15 2007, 03:47:59 UTC

This is the most real, adult take on Jake and Ennis I have had the honor to read. Maggie's ability to "see" Jack, well, who knows? Your writing is like a well written screen play, I am totally willing to suspend belief. A hugh shout out/thank you you for words.

mariska_to May 11 2007, 12:48:43 UTC

I have just come across this story and gobbled all the chapters up in one go. It is cathartic, and beautifully written. One of the best BBM fanfics I've read. Thank you for giving it to us!

talkstocoyotes May 11 2007, 15:33:33 UTC

You're welcome and thanks for the encouragement. I hope you keep reading!

mariska_to May 13 2007, 14:43:27 UTC

I will! I won't be able to keep myself away from it, that's for sure :)

chapter 19 anonymous June 15 2007, 00:35:51 UTC

was so glad to see an update on this story. ennis is in need of someone physical to love and be loved by. jack showwed wisdom in message to ennis in that he must move on in spite of is love for jack.
please keep the updates coming. can't wait to see what becomes of ennis and david.