Gift of Exile, Chapter 25

Aug 10, 2008 13:38



Maggie’s car had reappeared in the driveway when they arrived home a few days later. "Told ya she’d be back," David remarked but before they even got to the stairway Maggie hurried out the front door, dressed in what looked to Ennis like an Indian princess costume from an old movie and followed by a tall, blonde man. "H-e-y-y-y Ennis, Doctor D!" ( Read more... )

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bentgyro August 10 2008, 21:20:10 UTC
That was a great chapter! Looks like the slow dancing is going to speed up!
They are ready to move on in their relationship, how nice! Wonder what's wrong with Jonathan? Has Maggie found a good man? Can't wait to find out!
Thanks!
HT

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ky77ccl August 16 2008, 13:36:54 UTC
Great chapter! I loved this line - Ennis wasn’t aware that he was holding his breath until it burst out of him. "You think? Shit, Doc! I thought you’d done this!" Laughed out loud.
=)

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Riveting dkvj November 1 2008, 05:43:49 UTC
I have just found and read this fic. It is one of the best BBM fics I have read, poignant, believable, riveting. I love that you haven't trid to 'fix' the death, and yet haven't written Jack out of the story. I have never thought that Ennis would try another relationship, but I like the character you have created in David, and despite their differences, I can see something building between the two men.
Thank you for writing, and I eagerly await the continuation of this story.

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onefreetoroam March 8 2009, 04:38:35 UTC
Thanks so much for the update- kinda sad reading that part about Ennis and Jack's exploring, but wow - that swimming pool kiss sure livened things up. Thanks again. bob

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