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talkstocoyotes

Chapter 27

Jul 18, 2009 15:12

At Duluth’s high latitude summer days were unusually long, and sundown was still a few hours away when David’s car crossed the Aerial Bridge. But the mist that had been hovering tentatively over the Lake all afternoon was starting to thicken into fog, making it seem later than it was. They didn’t speak, but the silent tension stretched the ( Read more... )

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acht_acht July 18 2009, 21:16:24 UTC

SOOOO glad to see a new chapter, short but hot, promising ... but damn, this is the cliff-hangingest cliffhanger, how can you do that? Write!

Clara

wayne1932 July 18 2009, 21:36:22 UTC

good chapter, hurry with more.

Thanksfor writing

frillyheck July 18 2009, 23:16:35 UTC

OMG, I am SO happy to see a new chapter! I love this story, and now you just got me looking forward to whatever happens next! thank you thank you thank you.

animas1 July 19 2009, 02:32:00 UTC

Quite an intriguing chapter with numerous cross-currents roiling the emotional waters. It is always surprising when Ennis makes the first move...maybe because of his introversion or ambivalence about being gay to which being with anyone other than Jack would attest. There's a sense that David thinks his attraction to Ennis makes him disloyal to the memory of Nathan... attraction/appoach then guilt/pulling back. David also doesn't have the blessing of his former lover in the same way Ennis has received from Jack.

Always liked this story and glad to see it inspiring you again to write it down. Loved that phrase "pinballing about his mind" which is EXACTLY what those kinds of thoughts seem to do. Thank you.

Toni

Thank you! joetheone July 19 2009, 03:41:56 UTC

I'm happy you got caught up with this story and gave us another chapter. I'm sure David is feeling all sorts of feelings and emotions that if he brings them to surface not only does Ennis have to deal with them but so does he and he is afraid of those feelings and emotions almost as much as Ennis is of them. Ennis is used to taking charge and just going for it but not thinking until later and never verbalizing what is actually on his mind and this is where it gets very difficult for both of them. You handled this so well. Joe