Comments | talon: “men and melons are hard to know”

talon

Jan 29, 2015 17:09

"Are you sure you want to do this?" she asks him as they lie together in bed, face to face, fingers interlaced ( Read more... )

Comments 21

kickthehobbit January 30 2015, 01:29:26 UTC

This is...really fucking good.

(And you totally need to watch Dark City. YOU WILL UNDERSTAND WHY I SAID THIS WHEN YOU DO.)

talon February 2 2015, 18:54:53 UTC

Okay I will watch dark city. Also - thank you :)

jexia January 30 2015, 03:58:28 UTC

I agree, this is really good.

talon February 2 2015, 18:54:58 UTC

Thanks!

bleodswean January 30 2015, 16:42:19 UTC

You have so much talent. I enjoyed how you made this scenario so much your own, brought new ideas to it. Thought provoking.

talon February 2 2015, 18:55:07 UTC

Merci mille fois :)

crisp_sobriety January 30 2015, 16:58:43 UTC

This is really good.

At the writing level I especially admired the breakdown of the one, long, second, that really stuck with me.

talon February 2 2015, 18:55:12 UTC

Thank you!

suesniffsglue January 31 2015, 17:44:44 UTC

This was so cool. Really enjoyed it. Excellent work!!

talon February 2 2015, 18:55:18 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed!