Fanfic, Stargate Atlantis

[talyn10]

Now you find out what was really going on!

Title: Rodney's Alarm
Chapter: 10 of 12
Characters: Rodney and Zelenka mainly, with others from Atlantis
Summary: Rodney has a very alarming day
Rating: PG
Genre: Humour
Category: General
Warnings: None. No sex; no paring; no spoilers (sounds boring doesn't it?)
Disclaimer: The usual. Love the show, don't

Comments

[starrylizard]

I'm confused...that's not the end. So it's a ruse? or um more party bits? hmmm *thinks and waits*

Oh I meant to say I loved the flailing Rodney in tha last bit... Very Rodney...and the unmanly yelp of terror and Beckett's quiet concern are all nicely in character. Poor Kavanagh though. Why does everyone beat him up?

[talyn10]

Yes it is the birthday party, which everyone was guessing... I can't help myself, I like happy endings!

I find it hard not to want to beat up Kavanagh, especially after the way he behaved to Elizabeth. He also gives the impression he wouldn't mind if Rodney fell of a cliff. I wonder how he gets along with Zelenka???

Chapter 11 has been posted. Do you want the last chapter now?

[obfreak]

yes i agree with starrylizard, very cool so far but still waiting to see the ending

[talyn10]

It is pretty hard to write a climax after Rodney's unmanly yelp of terror! So really I have written more of an anticlimax, but I hope it is still enjoyable.

Would you like Chapter 12 now?

[obfreak]

Ohhh, Ohhhh yes plese!
*runs off to read chapter 11*