WTF????

[tambrathegreat]

Okay, another review that I just don't know how to answer.  Here it is:

Oh my wow. I read it once, and I was only slightly confused. All of the words
used a substitute for actual things got me slightly off balance. (though let
me tell you that those kinds of stories are my favorite). I re-read it,
leaving out the italic's of Alice's memories, and

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[pandorasilk1]

She's obviously got the vocabulary of a toddler. Tell her to go buy a dictionary. It seems that she's complimenting you on one hand though. Strange review.

Don't let it shake you Tambra. Some people just don't have depth! You are a brilliant writer. Don't' let her undermine your confidence.

[the_lady_zombie]

I've found that some people don't know how to handle the italics of a character's thoughts or reality.

I even had to re-read her comment twice to understand what she was driving at.

Yes, she's a bit goofy but I also think she did truly enjoy it and did what she had to so that it would make sense to her.

I hope she never tries to read deep fiction without someone around to spoon feed her.