Help please?

Jun 03, 2008 16:10

I'm finishing up my second chapter of "His Heart's Desire" and I'm starting on my third. Problem is, I need Jack in this chapter and I couldn't write Jack Sparrow if my life depended on it. If someone who can write Jack could help me out with his dialogue and characterization, I'd *really* appreciate it!!  

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jackdavfan692 June 5 2008, 06:55:24 UTC
Great job, tammsla, I love it :)! My advice on how to write Jack is pretty much the same as june7rose's, but with one extra thing. In addition to picturing him saying something and going from there, imagine Johnny Depp in the role, and write how you think he'd say the given line or how he'd play Jack in the given situation (e.g. what facial expressions he'd use, his attitude, how he'd deliver the line, etc.). That's how I wrote most of the characters in my fic, especially if I got stuck somehow- doing it that way seemed to work really well :).

I'm looking forward to reading more, and I'll catch you later :)!

Alexis

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tammsla June 5 2008, 18:04:52 UTC
Thank you! :D I only need him in two places for my next chapter, but he may be needed more often later on :D

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