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Fic: Coming Back - Chapter 15/16

Jan 24, 2012 21:41

Title: Coming Back - Chapter 15/16
Pairing: Lee/Kara
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Everything up to and including Exodus, Part 2
Summary: Kara and Lee seem to have reached an understanding and Kara might finally be healing. But what is the goal of the Final Five? How far will Leoben go to get Kara and will she and Lee be able to stop him?

A/N - Addendum - 1/ ( Read more... )

kara/lee, fanfic, apollo, starbuck, battlestar galactica, fanfiction, bsg

Comments 8

kdbleu January 25 2012, 03:49:01 UTC

I kind of love Sam channeling Leoben. Creepy and intriguing.

The ending was very sweet. Kara needs a little faith in her. :)

tamsibling January 26 2012, 01:39:37 UTC

Yeah, Kara does need to have a little bit of faith in herself. But maybe Lee will be able to convince her. Thanks for reading and responding! Glad you're still with me!

justascrewup2 January 28 2012, 21:54:29 UTC

Yay Kara and Lee going out to try to take control of the situation. What's next?

tamsibling January 29 2012, 01:37:46 UTC

What's next?

Hmm, well ... I can't tell, that'd spoil the surprise. But I hope to have the finale posted by tomorrow evening. Thanks for sticking with it and reading!

koolaidmom11 January 29 2012, 15:17:14 UTC

I don't know how I missed this but OMG!!! This chapter...Sam's timing was awful and the creepy channeling...yuck

This was a great chapter...please don't let Kara kill herself here..after all this

I love this story..I'll pay more attention from now on

tamsibling January 29 2012, 22:31:23 UTC

No worries, I haven't exactly been Miss Punctuality when I've been updating this story, so ... I can understand why you would have missed it. I think I finished it up today. I'll let you guys decide after you read. :)

Thanks for staying with me. So glad you liked this chappy. I think you'll enjoy the resolution of this fic as well.

rdave1 March 2 2012, 15:41:11 UTC

What a great chapter!!!

Leoben taking over Sam is very very creepy. Gives me the chills.

The end was beautiful. Starbuck and Apollo in one last battle so Lee and Kara can have the bright, shiny future. Plus, I adore Lee's explanation to Kara about why he is going with her and Kara's faith in herself and Lee is sweet.

Excellent work!

tamsibling March 2 2012, 17:34:58 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked this chapter. Yes, I agree that Sam channeling Leoben is uber-creepy. But since I don't really like Sam and never have, I didn't mind going there. :)

I felt that Lee maybe needed to tell Kara what was making him do this. Sometimes it's good for her to hear the words.

Thanks so much for reading!