Comments | tanakoi: The cabs drive by as you watch the sky on a black October night.

tanakoi

The cabs drive by as you watch the sky on a black October night.

Jul 16, 2009 00:59

5 minutes to midnight
pg, jaebum/nichkhun
( it's late and you've lost your sense of humor and yet still he makes you want to laugh; crazy, free. love. )

sarah is the g to my ri, fanfiction, khun ♥s jae, jae is a fake homophobe, nichkhun is horrible to type, :(

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jaybomb July 16 2009, 06:13:46 UTC

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jaybomb July 16 2009, 06:14:21 UTC

Before I even read, I would like to thank you for posting this ^_^

jaybomb July 16 2009, 07:00:38 UTC

I'm sorry, I will stop spamming you after this. I just wanted to let you know I created an author tag for you at jaekhun :)

jaybomb July 16 2009, 06:23:54 UTC

Okay so you just became one of my favorite authors what. This is one of the best fics I've ever read and, more importantly, the best JaeKhun fic I've ever read.

And there are so many parts I want to quote, really and I can't choose just one.

There are plenty of reasons that you can think of as to why he should not be dating someone, plenty very very good ones, convincing ones. But none of them are coming to mind. Instead, all you can seem to think is: “I just don't like it. I don't like the way it's making me jealous. Jealous, Jae. That's not natural, to be jealous over something like this. I don't like the way that it's confusing me.” But you can't say that to him because. You just can't. You feel a headache beginning to form again.

Absolutely loved this part. And your characterization throughout the entire fic was A++

Definitely memm-ing this. ♥

tanakoi July 16 2009, 06:27:28 UTC

Are you Jill? Haha. I think I used part of your AIM conversation to write this. lol. Sarah told me that that was where she got the prompt idea.

jaybomb July 16 2009, 06:28:40 UTC

lol only Sarah calls me that but yes. I still have the fic we wrote in that in the computer -___- I should probably finish that.

heechul_oppa July 16 2009, 19:09:58 UTC

YES IT WAS OUR CONVO. LOL. HI. I HATE YOU. >(

you wrote this at 1 something in the morning. the fuck are you on, bitch?
I mean. I love you for writing this. :) I'll properly review. Later. >D

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lady_akira July 16 2009, 08:19:07 UTC

i'm not even fond of the pairing but this was so well written and yeah, i think i'm going to read this over again today, so ♥♥

scribbler34 July 16 2009, 08:29:33 UTC

damn.
i think i just died.

earenya_beryl July 16 2009, 08:43:50 UTC

Ahhh... my personal favourite...confessions!!!!
I just love confessions...
Did I mention that I love con...I should stop. LOL

And you did it extremely well, I mean the nervous gestures, the imagery from Khun's POV, every heartbeat, every tremble, I can almost feel it as if my own.It's not grand, it's not planned but you know, a confession in a kitchen is just as romantic, especially if it ends with a kiss.

ily and thanks for posting this!