So we've been assigned to write a 12-to-25 page short story for Fiction Writing, and I think I may have an interesting beginning. ( Here's what I have so far. )
Ohhh man - that's like every person's nightmare... I'm always terrified of something like that happening to me. Very well written - I love how you describe the inward sensations he feels. Very nice. Kudos.
oh yeah and this also hits home cuz the first day i moved in here i discovered that our toilet handle is broken - and it STILL hasn't been fixed #$%^&*!
okay so this is highly late but when i moved into mcconell last semester we discovered a broken toilet because my dad had to pee; he fixed it and left and showed everyone how to use it properly except for laurel who didn't get there until around 6 PM...so she did the same thing and broke the damn toilet X_X
six girls using one toilet = BAD!
wow on the description of panic
okay sorry for never reading anyone's stories..i consider myself too busy but now i'm just waiting to get let into warren so i have some time
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six girls using one toilet = BAD!
wow on the description of panic
okay sorry for never reading anyone's stories..i consider myself too busy but now i'm just waiting to get let into warren so i have some time
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