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Short Story Project - Completed!

Sep 20, 2006 03:21

The final draft (I use the term final loosely, here) is finished at 18 pages. The plot takes some strange and drastic terms that I'm not sure I'm happy with, but given the deadline it's the best I could conjecture. That, and I wrote the last 11 pages in one night. XD ( Read more... )

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lilrogue9 September 20 2006, 17:37:38 UTC

me like. as for feedback, i already mentioned the thing about the magically appearing boot part and yeah. as for other suggestions (i know by the time you read this you'll have already turned this in but) i think i would like to be able to get a little more into Nathan's personality - meaning i think i would like to know more about his feelings and such. *shrug* just a thought. overall nice job :-)