The Wind Hitting Our Broken Strings: Alternative Ending

[bloodofpyke]

the wind hitting our broken strings | zayn/niall; background harry/louis, liam/louis, and just about every other combination you can think of, really | 644 | pg-13 | he remembers wanting to feel free | warnings for: major character death; depression; vague suicidal longings | alternative ending to the original, which can be read here; picks off

Comments

[theclownpig]

I did consider not putting myself through this, but then I decided I loved your writing more than my emotional stability.

REALLY THOUGH, A FIRE?!?!? HE BURNED TO DEATH LEAH THAT IS SO PAINFUL AND CRUEL and maybe it rings true, because Niall can only shine so bright without burning.

The part about him being untethered now was especially painful. Be careful what you wish for, I suppose.

Basically, you are the worst human but I am a masochist and I love you and I love this.

[skiptothelu]

I completely agree with this comment...

Niall can only shine so bright without burning.

but this, this just made me come to terms with it. I like the alternate ending.

[bloodofpyke]

niall can only shine so bright without burning

you need to leave omg that was even worse than me, i think

(i love you)

[cityskiesx3]

I KNEW I SHOULDN'T HAVE CLICKED BUT I DID......... leah you have a PROBLEM!!!!!!!!!!!

ngl. eating it up, tho. how cruel, but how fitting.... like harry's comment, the hottest stars are white and blue................... and then when they're yellow and gold, the closer they are to exploding. god. please. help. me.

;______________;

leah.

[bloodofpyke]

I JUST WANTED YOU ALL TO SHARE IN MY PAIN WITH ME!!!

i do have a problem though omg i need to stop killing niall off

[theclownpig]

You really do.

[thediamondskies]

I KIND OF LIKE THIS ENDING MORE???

i dunno , i guess i'm twisted. but i always prefer the angsty ending. this is really good!

[bloodofpyke]

oh no, i do too!! you're in good company! angst is always the answer--and this isn't even the first time i've killed niall off, poor little ball of sunshine--so i'm glad you agree!

[foreverlarrup]

Noooooooooooo

[bloodofpyke]

haha this seems to be the general reaction to this :)

[loudveins]

And little kitten Niall, he's not supposed to die! They're supposed to live happily ever after in a castle with rainbows and magical puppies, because they earned it. The things your writing does to me, it's not even fair.

[bloodofpyke]

i have a problem where i literally cannot stop myself from killing niall off once i think of it, i really need to work on that (but thank you omg!!)