Comments | tangledwood: endgames

tangledwood

endgames

Dec 05, 2009 19:33

( The King's Pawn is almost gone. )

brigit's flame

Comments 13

lieffpile December 6 2009, 02:18:50 UTC

This was really vividly imagined. I love the world you created. It was a bit heartbreaking, actually.
Good stuff!
Luck

tangledwood December 6 2009, 14:55:26 UTC

Oh, I'm glad you liked the world. (And I'm glad it hurt your heart a little!) Thank you so much. : )

rephen December 6 2009, 12:49:39 UTC

I love the chess-coloured analogy, and how the character is very trapped in it. Gorgeous work. Strange and evoking, and truly, I have missed your entries very much.

Lovely piece.

tangledwood December 6 2009, 14:56:18 UTC

Aw, shucks. Thanks. I've missed writing for BF. : )
Thank you for your lovely comments!

tigerstriped86 December 6 2009, 21:47:09 UTC

Just fantastic! Was this for the prompt cue? I think I missed if it was, but its a very well written story with lots of wonderfully descriptive terms that endears the old pawn to me. <3

tangledwood December 7 2009, 04:42:52 UTC

Yeah, this was for the prompt cue. I hope it makes sense; it's kind of a broad interpretation of it. Either way, I'm glad you liked it!

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tangledwood December 7 2009, 04:43:21 UTC

Chess pieces are a prominent part of Through the Looking Glass, so maybe that's it? Anyway, thanks for the kind words!

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tangledwood December 8 2009, 22:34:01 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed.
(I was a little worried it would come off as wizard chess, alas!)