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Good morning to you (but good night to me)

Jul 20, 2010 21:24

Title: Good morning to you (but good night to me)
Author: xoxo_nat_xx
Pairing: Eunhyuk/Donghae; Heechul/Eunhyuk
Rating: PG
Summary: It’s about going along with your desires and accomplishing them, because he’s still young. He can afford to be immature, to commit mistakes, and so he waits.

( “Glad to know that you are drinking something without caffeine at night over at New York,” Hyukjae states, glancing up at the sunlight beating down on the path in Korea. )

pairing: eunhyuk/heechul!, focus: eunhyuk!~, length: woah it's a one-shot!, genre: romance o.o, rating: pg, pairing: eunhyuk/donghae!, genre: angst o.o

Comments 28

hyukhae4ever July 20 2010, 13:35:27 UTC

EAT's ^^

tees2mai July 20 2010, 16:07:42 UTC

CHEERS -knocks invisible glass of whatever with yours-

OH BB, THIS WAS ALL KINDS OF BEAUTIFUL, BECAUSE I'M A SUCKER FOR THIS KIND OF HEARTBREAK. What are you talking about? You still write wonderfully!

I like Heechuls role in this. I love that both Heechul and Eunhyuk can't be selfish enough. I like that Donghae's always looking at the bright side of things. I love that Heechuls the one that brings him back.

“One step at a time,” Donghae is mouthing, and Hyukjae looks, and he nods.

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3.24am ( ... )

tees2mai July 20 2010, 16:09:07 UTC

also, i like that you brought in the cats.

I kept thinking about how Eunhyuk would turn into the crazy old cat lady, but then thats Heechuls role <3

xoxo_nat_xx July 23 2010, 10:15:54 UTC

GUH I WAS SO AFRAID THAT THIS PIECE WAS SUCKY ):

But seriously, looking at the number of comments I get for this fic now, it's really really low, and unlike what I used to get too. I whined to clarissa, and she said everybody forgot who I am, because most of them only remember the new writers these days. I'm discouraged ):

And nobody seems to really understand the meaning of the role of the cats in this fic :S I don't know if my writing is just really confusing and nobody really catches the depth of the fic. Guh, this is discouraging. ):

Okay, let's write beautiful fics together (:

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crossing_by July 20 2010, 14:33:51 UTC

*hugs* heechul ...
thank you :D

xoxo_nat_xx July 23 2010, 10:20:51 UTC

thank you for reading and commenting! i wasn't sure if people would like how i portray heechul in here; he seems a bit vulnerable and all sorts, so yeah :S

scarlet_ember July 20 2010, 15:22:16 UTC

SPOT

bb, just let me finish my thesis proposal and I'll sit down and be a good fan. ^__^ just reserving my spot.

akane132 July 20 2010, 15:52:09 UTC

aw~
Can understand how loneliness took over when we lost someone

It's a beautiful fic
[but i dun really understand at the end, and what with the cats play in this, i'm kinda slow ^^]

xoxo_nat_xx July 23 2010, 10:24:31 UTC

thank you for reading and commenting!

well, not a lot of people understood the cats' role in here, and i think you are one of the few to actually say it to me! i'm really glad for your feedback :)

baengshin is like hyukjae, while heebum is like heechul. in the end, hyukhae exists irl, but the ending scene suggests that there is also hyukchul, because hyukjae seems undecided between both donghae and heechul. (fishydotlove above has a good interpretation to the meaning of the cats as well, you can read it i guess) it just hints at the existence of hyukchul as well, though hyukjae seems to favour donghae. i hope this helps!

eunhaelover July 20 2010, 17:47:27 UTC

Heechul *A*
beautifullllll <3

xoxo_nat_xx July 23 2010, 10:25:42 UTC

thank you for commenting! i really appreciate it :)