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xoxo_nat_xx December 2 2010, 08:14:30 UTC
spot for fishydotlove!

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fishydotlove December 2 2010, 09:55:33 UTC
OMG IT'S MINEEE! 8DD

/RUNS AROUND

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fishydotlove December 2 2010, 14:11:03 UTC
I LOVE YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW, YOU KNOW THAT RIGHT!

it worths the wait, omg!

the way you write eunhyuk as the experienced adult contrasting to the unsure donghae is really really nice. love it ♥
this is kinda similar to the smut you plotted last time tho?
/sighs broken eunhae bcause of society is always heartbreaking, it makes this look so real. But thats what makes this beautiful~ i'm memming this forever thank you! if you still want your birthday fic in return, tell me kay!

OMG YOU AND HYUKJAE'S NECK. YOU MAKE IT SOUNDS SO HOT, HIS NECK AND ADAM APPLE :| ♥

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xoxo_nat_xx December 5 2010, 02:59:57 UTC
Hahaha intially my focus wasn't supposed to be on hyukjae's neck, it was supposed to be on his hip bones, but something happened along the way and swallowing and gasping and bobbing adam apple sounded very much sexier (or I just can't describe hip bones properly to make them seem sexy :/)

And yay I'm so glad you think it's worth waiting for, it's like 6 months or more since your birthday. /fails.

Now I shall wait patiently for my birthday fic yay!

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chiyo_87 December 2 2010, 09:25:50 UTC
spot^^

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chiyo_87 December 2 2010, 09:41:20 UTC
OMG! THIS IS AMAZING! I'm speechless! The flow of the story was just so mystical to me that I was in a complete daze throughout! This is going straight to my mems!!!

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xoxo_nat_xx December 5 2010, 03:00:30 UTC
thank you for reading! I'm so glad you liked it so much and oh my memming yay!

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tees2mai December 2 2010, 09:34:10 UTC
OMGGGG WHEN DID YOU FINISH THIS? WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME? /SPOT

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tees2mai December 2 2010, 16:41:22 UTC
Okay, this isn't rushed. It's actually the perfect pace for the type of story this is. Had it been longer or stretched out further this would have lost it's spark.

The descriptions are the best. Like how you describe them and don't describe them all at the same time, the little information you give out here and there. I was in love with the idea since the day you told me it.

I think there's some of sort of intelligence lingering over the whole thing which is kind of hard to pick up in fics of this genre at times.

You did a great job, NOW SIT YOUR ASS DOWN AND CONTINUE TO WRITE.

“I like you,” Donghae catches it as it slips out of Eunhyuk’s mouth, and he opens his eyes to watch Eunhyuk’s gaze. It’s friendly, a bit protective, more of an elder brother watching his younger brother grow right in front of his eyes, mixed with slight regret of what could have possibly happened between them if they allow it to continue, and Donghae drops Eunhyuk’s gaze as he shifts his to the snaking lines of cars outside the hotel, moving like a snail ( ... )

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xoxo_nat_xx December 5 2010, 03:01:41 UTC
You know I love your long-ass comments. (:

<3

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kimochi501 December 2 2010, 10:26:34 UTC
it's been a long time since i last saw you write./SPOT

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kimochi501 December 2 2010, 10:52:46 UTC
YOU ARE A.M.A.Z.I.N.G.
i am speechless, it's been too long since i read a haehyuk good fic and you never fail to be great and write one.

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xoxo_nat_xx December 5 2010, 03:02:49 UTC
Yeah I know it has been ages since I wrote my last piece, which was like, the beginning of the semester? School has kept me pretty busy throughout and it was just rushing rushing and more rushing and no time to breathe.

I'm really glad you like this piece! (: I was afraid that I had lost my touch, and that this piece may not please as many as I used to. Oh well. :/

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kimochi501 December 5 2010, 04:47:20 UTC
im happy you have the time to write now.:) you're so osm not to write.

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seven10ninty December 2 2010, 15:19:42 UTC
OMG
YOU'RE BACKKKK!!
KYAAAAAAAA I REALLY9 LOVE UR FICS!
You always manage to capture my heart!
How i love ur writing..for this one,, its true rite, reality is just heart braking..
I feel sorry for the both of them, they feel something towards each other but reality wont let them be together. Since u wrote this, i will surely wait for ur update on what medical doesnt train u for.. take ur tyme writing these great fics. ILY! *hugs*

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xoxo_nat_xx December 5 2010, 03:04:37 UTC
Yes I'm back! (And gone until the next writing inspiration hits me (:)

Ahh...as for What Medical School Doesn't Train You For, I would probably continue it only next year. :/ In the meantime, hopefully I can produce more one-shots! And thank you for reading! (:

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seven10ninty December 5 2010, 05:49:21 UTC
next year? its alright,,ill wait for it~~
hope to read a new one from u soon~~
=))

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