...I think this is one of the most random things I've ever read XDDD.
Some of it was really good, but it's just so...disjointed. It's like this is a direct feed from your brainwaves as you dream or something. Seriously. Umm. I don't know. I like reading your writing a lot, but you should read this over maybe a week from now. And um. See what you did. XDDDDDD.
The smut...just...well. Something tells me you'd really like the Naruto 'uke' site.
I think if maybe you could smooth this out then it'll work. The scene set-up at the start was good, but the last part was definitely rushed.
Anyhoo! It'll be cool to read some more of your stuff soon-ish!
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LOL. Oh man. LOL.
...I think this is one of the most random things I've ever read XDDD.
Some of it was really good, but it's just so...disjointed. It's like this is a direct feed from your brainwaves as you dream or something. Seriously. Umm. I don't know. I like reading your writing a lot, but you should read this over maybe a week from now. And um. See what you did. XDDDDDD.
The smut...just...well. Something tells me you'd really like the Naruto 'uke' site.
I think if maybe you could smooth this out then it'll work. The scene set-up at the start was good, but the last part was definitely rushed.
Anyhoo! It'll be cool to read some more of your stuff soon-ish!
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You'll probably kill Kevin's and Soo Chong's unwitting eyes with this! =P
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Oh, and probably wise decision. XDD.
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