Bom-chiky-bom

[tanooki_suit]

Well, I found out at 12:30 that I don't have Anthro tomorrow morning, SOOOO.... I decided to stay up late and finish my short story. And yup, I finished it. I'm proud of what I have so far, it looks good, and I already see that there is some editing that could be done. Anyway, here's my short story. Read it, critique it... and yeah. Read it,

Comments

[emukid77]

and of course he drove a GTI...beautiful...good stuff joe...

[owlpellet]

The GTI had me and Caterine rollin. So did "Bush to nominate next person who walks through the door." I liked this story. good dialogue.