oh!this part is more interesting cant wait for next chap what will happen next?
**your story is very interesting but i think there is something missing. maybe a detail that make your story is too short,can you find someone who can help you to write or to describe the story? i don't want you to stop writing this fics, coz I love the story of the fics.
actually i don't know anyone on livejournal.. I made this acount years ago soo I can read fanfics.. and this fic I wrote years ago when I discovered RYODA..unfurtunatly it's unfinished and i'm NEW TO WRITING i;ts not actually a thing i'm good at i decided to let the chapters i wrote like they were I will post them and then I'll decide what to write next thank you for the advice i'll asure you that the 4rt chapter will be more long and detalied..
Oh my...step-father n son! Seriously? ! Hontou?!....well.....if for RyoDa, I bet it will be ok ^_^v Ok the missing part, the emotion of charecter that's why I lack of it ^^' Sorry~ (I missed that part) *bow* This chap is good...keep going till the end ne ^^ I wonder how will Erica react towards this. She seem to be a good women. And I hope Ryo will be the gentlemen for the both party.
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I wonder what will happen now
And if Erica know will she like it??
Wait for next
Thank you
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I'LL UPDATE SOON :)
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**your story is very interesting but i think there is something missing.
maybe a detail that make your story is too short,can you find someone who can help you to write or to describe the story? i don't want you to stop writing this fics, coz I love the story of the fics.
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I made this acount years ago soo I can read fanfics..
and this fic I wrote years ago when I discovered RYODA..unfurtunatly it's unfinished and i'm NEW TO WRITING i;ts not actually a thing i'm good at
i decided to let the chapters i wrote like they were
I will post them and then I'll decide what to write next
thank you for the advice i'll asure you that the 4rt chapter will be more long and detalied..
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I'm sorry if i make u down ,dont angry plzzz ><.i just want your fic perfect and i love the whole story.
waiting fir next chap.
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it's always good to improve :)
THANK YOU :)
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Ok the missing part, the emotion of charecter that's why I lack of it ^^' Sorry~ (I missed that part) *bow*
This chap is good...keep going till the end ne ^^
I wonder how will Erica react towards this. She seem to be a good women. And I hope Ryo will be the gentlemen for the both party.
Thanks again 4 sharing this fic =)
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