You & I (we have a lil something) (for torontok) - 2/2

[taobeis]

Comments

[torontok]

I'll be back to comment later but omg!!!!!!!!!
ETA: Baaack.
Okay, well to start with I'm really glad you picked this prompt because I love dad Tao so much. All his little interactions with Li Hua had me cooing throughout the entire fic.I also liked your gang of side characters especially secret softie Uncle Soo and Aunt Kris (I could spend an entire paragraph cooing over married Krisoo but I'll refrain).
I love how you wrote ChenTao's dynamic with the teasing and over eagerness and wow, Jongmi is hot af, I can see why Tao is so sprung.
Nipple biting scene had me pulling a kris and wheezing with laughter, thank you for that.
ALSO HELL THAT SEX?!!!!!!! YOU AHD ME FOOLED INTO THINKING A NICE CLASSY JAZZ CLUB DATE BUT INSTEAD I GET WONDERFUL FILTHY 69-ING (!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)AND JONGMI IN CONTROL AND WOW THAT NIPPLE PLAY MENTION WAY TO TEASE.
everything is precious and adorable and wow, thank you so much for writing this

[homiten]

I'm happy to hear that you liked it! I enjoyed writing it and it's the longest fic i've ever written.

[babygunsho]

Oh wow this is great. I think I've never read het taochen before (or maybe I had and forgot) Olivia is so precious. I love how Tao met Jongmi in the library and that she's not as innocent as he thinks she is. The smut is so hot! Love how Kyungsoo is just so caring to Olivia and Jongmi's character a lot. The ending is cute too >w< thank you for making this! ^^ ❤ ❤ ❤

[homiten]

I've never written het chentao before haha! There's a first time for everything. I'm glad you liked it! Thank you so very much for reading my fic.

[myenduringheart]

This was so good!! I loved all the scenes with Tao and Olivia - Dad Tao with a baby girl was so damn cute it made me want to claw my face off - and all the side characters were perfect. Jongmi was incredible and the way their relationship developed was both cute and hot and the sex scene aasdfsfdafdadaafdaf. Sorry this is incoherent but I liked it a lot!

[homiten]

It's not incoherent at all! Thank you so much for reading. <3

[anonymous]

i've never read het taochen but i'm always 100% game for girl chen and you didn't disappoint. this was WONDERFUL. and tao as a dad!!! i loved everything about this it was so good, thank you!

[homiten]

Thank you so much for giving it a chance! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. ;;