Because you're mine, I walk the line (for EVERYONE)
For: EVERYONE
From: e2x2o
Title: Because you're mine, I walk the line
Rating: NC-17
Pairing(s): Tao/Suho
Length: 4700 words
Summary: A wedding ring doesn't always equal a wedding.
Warning(s): n/a
Author’s Note: Dear, recipient I’m sorry if this is rushed, I hope you’ll still like it and I hope I could follow your prompt as closely as possible ( Read more... )
From: e2x2o
Title: Because you're mine, I walk the line
Rating: NC-17
Pairing(s): Tao/Suho
Length: 4700 words
Summary: A wedding ring doesn't always equal a wedding.
Warning(s): n/a
Author’s Note: Dear, recipient I’m sorry if this is rushed, I hope you’ll still like it and I hope I could follow your prompt as closely as possible ( Read more... )
Comments 7
and this fic!!!! tao wearing his heart on his sleeve and thinking it's okay because he finally has someone to trust it with but - “But not enough. You don’t love me enough.” it's like a knife slowly tore open my cold heart that loves angst and made me into a teary eyed mess because no!!! don't do this to taozi, my emotional lil beb that loves with everything he is whether he tries or not.
“You’re...you’re not denying it, hyung.”at this point i was nothing more than a puddle of goo on the floor ( ... )
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i love your prose and your dialogue and i love how you've written the story out?? like it's just the right amount of angst and love and smut and it doesn't seem too hurried or too laggy??? it's so great like wow teach me how please??
and communication !!!! i'm glad that although their problem slightly arose from communication it wasn't really that that tipped over their ~break time~ and rather it was the fact that junmyeon was just unsure?? and really, the communication at the end too where junmyeon takes the incentive to continue and speak on is so good <33
also !!!!! BOTTOM ZITAO !!!!!!! TOP JUNMYEON !!!!!! GOOD JOB I LOVE YOU ; U ;
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well punch me in the fucking face tHIS FIC
the proposal HURT and the "because you don't love me enough" hurt but was also so realistic. Sometimes people love but they aren't ready and sometimes the other person can't see through that cloud of emotion to rationalize and realize until afterwards and that's so sutao and I'm so lol at jm country hopping but
AHHH i loved this. It was this kind of raw there it is pain that had me tearing up a little bit
Now he just has to make Zitao believe him again. Convince him of this too. Because Joonmyun is done running away.
I adore this line so much. Joonmyun coming to his senses and realizes that it's his turn to try his turn to put in that effort and he knows it needs to be drastic with the lack of communication
Your writing is gorgeous and i loved the pacing of this, and I love sutao <3
thanks for writing this ;;;
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Zitao's insecurity and heartbreak in this just made me want to wrap him up into a blanket and cuddle him. my poor baby and yet it's written in such a raw way so i can't help but feel? even though it hurts it's absolutely wonderful.
Joonmyun forgetting the anniversary.... i just... :( my babyyy tao :( and taozi just... trying to tell himself it's gonna be okay????
UGH BUT
ZITAO AS JOONMYUN'S HOME.
THEM FINDING BACK TOGETHER.
MY HEART JUST :(
AND STILL???
thank you for writing this <3
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THEY'RE GONNA BE OKAY BECAUSE THEY LOVE EACH OHER SO MUCH AND THEY'RE EACH OTHERS HOMES!!!!
ok im sorry i'll chill
but just yes
i haaaaaaate sad sutao because sutao deserves beautiful things!!!
but this was a great sad sutao, an allowed sad sutao because the conflict and the resolution were so very them
tao reckless and emotional and so fucking needy and joonmyun awkward and bumbling and not very good at answering or explaining himself
so ahhh this conflict, this awful conflict that leaves their relationship temporarily broken but mercifully saved!!!
they'll be okay, they always will
because they are each other's homes!!!!!!
anyway, in case it wasn't already clear, i love this ;;;
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