Oh my, this was so good. I liked how Tao worms his way into Jongdae's life until they become friends and perfect cuddle partners and how they're different but complementary: Tao only wanting to be spoiled, and Jongdae only wanting to spoil.
Also I really love your characterisation of Tao in particular - he's soft, emotional, but also completely aware of his own self worth: that he deserves everything. That's always the way I like to imagine him and it's such a shame when that nuance is missed.
ahhh thank you so much for appreciating the details ;;
yes, chentao is great because of that balance chen is a natural caretaker, and tao just kinda soaks up all that affection like a sunflower they really complement each other, imo, and it makes for a good dynamic and good something more when chen acts on the reciprocated urge to take it ~further between them
also yes, on the tao thing, tao is needy in a lot of ways and likes public displays of affection and validation, but he's still ike, very much aware of how amazing and hot and stellar he is my baby ;;
DGJHAGSJHGDJKGSKD THIS IS GORGEOUS -- Ahhh so much praise so much love. Your characterizations really got me, even the off screen Minseok who was very much Minseok even while breaking hearts.
Tao just has this beautiful vulnerability and you captured it so well -- and Jongdae's natural need to nurture and help and just be there for others. How easily he gives into this sad omega at his door and just wants to take care of him and help him -- not just because he's an alpha and Tao's an omega but because Tao is just so Tao
This was my favourite prompt and I'm so happy you picked this one;;; it's everything I could have imagined out of it and i just love the dynamic of these two. It was simple and unhurried and I'm glad Tao, who was so open and emotional had such a realistic grip on his self worth and who he is, which a lot of the time doesn't exist in abo
This was just beautiful honestly?? I love chentao so much gah I love this!!
Tao’s got soft eyes and a curled kittenish smile and the kind of laughter you want to keep provoking,
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he’s the kind of treat you gorge yourself on to nausea, the kind of sweet that you binge, the kind of indulgence that leaves you with an ache in your teeth, a pang in your stomach, a hunger still in your throat for more, more, more.
That got stuck in my throat and left me breathless. I feel so touched and it's not even for me haha.
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it is supremely flattering ;;;
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Also I really love your characterisation of Tao in particular - he's soft, emotional, but also completely aware of his own self worth: that he deserves everything. That's always the way I like to imagine him and it's such a shame when that nuance is missed.
That was so great, thank you!
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yes, chentao is great because of that balance
chen is a natural caretaker, and tao just kinda soaks up all that affection like a sunflower
they really complement each other, imo, and it makes for a good dynamic and good something more when chen acts on the reciprocated urge to take it ~further between them
also yes, on the tao thing, tao is needy in a lot of ways and likes public displays of affection and validation, but he's still ike, very much aware of how amazing and hot and stellar he is
my baby ;;
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Tao just has this beautiful vulnerability and you captured it so well -- and Jongdae's natural need to nurture and help and just be there for others. How easily he gives into this sad omega at his door and just wants to take care of him and help him -- not just because he's an alpha and Tao's an omega but because Tao is just so Tao
This was my favourite prompt and I'm so happy you picked this one;;; it's everything I could have imagined out of it and i just love the dynamic of these two. It was simple and unhurried and I'm glad Tao, who was so open and emotional had such a realistic grip on his self worth and who he is, which a lot of the time doesn't exist in abo
This was just beautiful honestly?? I love chentao so much gah I love this!!
Tao’s got soft eyes and a curled kittenish smile and the kind of laughter you want to keep provoking, ( ... )
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There were so many things that got me, but:
he’s the kind of treat you gorge yourself on to nausea, the kind of sweet that you binge, the kind of indulgence that leaves you with an ache in your teeth, a pang in your stomach, a hunger still in your throat for more, more, more.
That got stuck in my throat and left me breathless. I feel so touched and it's not even for me haha.
Thank you so much for sharing this <3
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tao is just so fucking good and so fucking beautiful and it's great writing people being helplessly infatuated with him
thank you for reading ;;;;
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thank you for reading!!!
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