Making up [Tara/Lindsey/Spike]

[remember_nomore]

Ok, here's a note. I didn't write this. Cat did [gwyddfid] but she's never posted the farkin' thing public. It's about damn time that someone did! Damnit.

She wrote this note to me well over a year ago: You’re the only one who’s read it so far, but if you want to share it please feel free. *hugs*So that's what I'm doing. Feel free to leave comments and

Comments

[skytteflickan88]

Nice. Hot. I hate the idea that Spike would turn Tara, but it really works in this piece. Might have to do with the fact that it's a PWP.
For me, Tara calling Spike 'daddy' is silly, and reminds me way too much about Drusilla, which Spike of course should like.

And a little error;
"Spike gasped out, sliding his penis into her warm mouth." Unless she has resently eaten, I don't think that she could be varm. Lukevarm perhaps, but not very likely warm.

Otherwise, I think you did a good job. It's a hot fuck-story.

[remember_nomore]

There is more to this verse than this story, there's a huge background to how and why he turned her. If you ever read it you'll see what I'm talking about. Everything has it's reasons.

ty for the feedback, I will show Cat when I see her again. I'm sure she'll love remembering this fic.

I have a lot of Tara, Lindsey and Spike fic in my fic lj if you'd like to read. Together and seperate. As well as the RP and fic that this verse is from.

[skytteflickan88]

Cool. I'll look in your memories.

[remember_nomore]

my writing journal is simply_shiny :)