Mar Cadet Chapter 1

[taralon_phoenix]

So, I've decided to try and write something a bit different than my standard fare.  I'm trying for a young adult type feel.  Ala Heinlein's older stuff.

Chapter 1 Restart

Jamie looked up at the rippling fabric nearly three stories overhead, and took a long pull of oxygen from her mask.  The Skipper was counting on her.  She was the only

Comments

I keep trying to read this and get inturrupted

[tiger0range]

expect comments at one time or another.

BTW My son was commenting at the same time, but I decided to erase it because it was as unintelligible as his talking.