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taralynden

[Fic] A dangerous game, chapter 7

Apr 19, 2013 07:26

Title: A dangerous game
Rating: T

Summary: Games aren't so much fun when someone dies; but is Jazz really responsible or is someone else playing games at Iacon Academy?

( Chapter 7 )

fanfic, transformers

Comments 4

wicked3659 April 19 2013, 04:32:14 UTC

Things are looking tense! I do hope they can get out of this. Gripping as always looking forward to the next part. :3

taralynden April 19 2013, 19:22:27 UTC

Well where would the fun be if it wasn't tense? ;)

See you next week!

peacewish April 20 2013, 15:19:26 UTC

Villains and their penchant for monologuing. Shouldn't that be twice as dangerous in a world where everyone comes strapped with their own persona recording devices? Careful Slimline, keep going and James Bond will find a way to wriggle out of this. You're just giving him time.

taralynden April 20 2013, 19:31:20 UTC

Oh definitely cliche, but I didn't want to go too long and detailed on this fic, and we needed to hear her motives. And even if she knew he was recording I don't think it would change anything - she's more than a few circuits short of a full motherboard and stress seems to be making her worse.

As for James Bond, well right now he's feeling more like Robin hoping Batman will turn up soon to save him. Not that he's going to miss any opportunities to rescue himself that might come his way.