Comments | taralynden: [Fic] Chaos came with a bang, chapter 5

taralynden

[Fic] Chaos came with a bang, chapter 5

Jul 19, 2013 07:07

Rating: T
Universe: G1-AU
Pairings: Jazz/Prowl (secret), Ratchet/Wheeljack

Summary: Life in the Ark was often complicated, but things get out of control when Wheeljack and Ratchet are both seriously injured in an accident. Can First Aid save them? Will Sideswipe take on a new career? And in all the chaos will Bumblebee figure out Jazz's biggest ( Read more... )

fanfic, transformers, tf:chaos

Comments 5

wicked3659 July 19 2013, 03:50:15 UTC

I'm going to have no nails left by the end of this. So much tension! *frets for everyone* that's all the coherency I've got at this stage ^^;;

taralynden July 19 2013, 04:43:04 UTC

Oops. *offers gloves to protect nails* Can't have that.

Yeah, a little tense at times. Sorry about that. It happens sometimes.

But look, if you had to name a team of three to protect the Ark against a gestalt, who better than Prowl, Jazz and Sunny, right?

wicked3659 July 19 2013, 06:38:45 UTC

That gestalt isn't going to know what hit it xD

peacewish July 20 2013, 13:59:01 UTC

I just love it when Jazz is being his wicked and devious self. Grenade, yeah got it right here. That 'thing' I mentioned? And 3-2-1, here we go with happy blow up times! It's always fun when Sunstreaker realizes that for all his temper and vicious reputation, he's still got no candle to hold against wacky maniacal Jazz. Pity the frontline Decepticons that had to take the brunt of his little toy.

I have just as much love for Sideswipe's impression of the ever-efficient and underemotional Prowl. Whether it was Laserbeak or the entire enemy army - he'd look just the same and sound the same and give the exact same orders. Ah, Prowl, so badass are ye.

taralynden July 21 2013, 06:52:55 UTC

No-one's better than Jazz at being prepared for everything while staying nonchalant, and Sunny's not too proud to acknowledge it (silently, to himself, at least)

Oh yes. These Cons are in for a disappointment if they think this is going to be easy.

Of course, Sideswipe is perfectly right about Prowl. Panicking isn't going to help anyone, so of course he will just get on with the job. Very badass. (And Jazz thinks it's rather sexy, which just makes Prowl enjoy it all the more ^_~)