Comments | taralynden: [Fic] Chaos came with a bang, chapter 6

taralynden

[Fic] Chaos came with a bang, chapter 6

Jul 26, 2013 06:44

Rating: T
Universe: G1-AU
Pairings: Jazz/Prowl (secret), Ratchet/Wheeljack

Warning: a bit more of that mechanical gore in this chapter

Summary: Life in the Ark was often complicated, but things get out of control when Wheeljack and Ratchet are both seriously injured in an accident. Can First Aid save them? Will Sideswipe take on a new career? And ( Read more... )

fanfic, transformers, tf:chaos

Comments 6

wicked3659 July 25 2013, 19:30:44 UTC

*noms all the popcorn while reading all the drama and tense excitement*

*is rubbish at decent comments*

taralynden July 25 2013, 19:40:39 UTC

Feel free to nom the popcorn. At least you're letting me know you're reading and enjoying - makes a writer feel loved ^_^

camfield July 26 2013, 01:41:27 UTC

I can't imagine anyone liking comm duty. XD

Other than that, it seems Sideswipe is suffering from a case of jitters! *pats* Powr bebe.

taralynden July 26 2013, 03:03:56 UTC

Oh, I think Blaster finds it okay. And Prowl finds it informative. And Red Alert likes to know everything that's going on... But no, for the general Ark population it's not the favourite duty. ;)

Sideswipe needs those pats, he'd really rather be out fighting Cons, no matter who it is nor how badly they're outnumbered. He's going to be even more put out when he finds out that Sunny and Prowl went up against the Constructicons without him!

(BTW, being too lazy to look up your ffdn account, Glad you liked the other two, both Prime and Prowl's versions ^_^)

peacewish August 8 2013, 02:00:07 UTC

I'm backlogged in reviews because I've been reading the updates on my phone during lunch break. Am finally installed in new apartment with functioning internet connection, yay! This scene was supremely tense, and I am right there with Prowl's suspicions. If Megatron knew the Ark was compromised he'd have sent a lot more mechs, and why set up a distraction after springing the real offensive? No, Prowl, listen to your instincts and your logic, something's up.

taralynden August 12 2013, 22:00:32 UTC

No worries (though it's lovely to get a bunch of reviews ^_^) I'm a bit backed up myself with all sorts of things. But yay for having a functioning internet connection! *waves pompoms*

*nods thoughtfully at comments and smiles secretively* Well you and Prowl may be right... or not. We'll have to wait and see.