[Fic] Chaos came with a bang, chapter 14

[taralynden]

Title:Rating: T
Universe: G1-AU
Pairings: Jazz/Prowl (secret), Ratchet/Wheeljack

Summary: Life in the Ark was often complicated, but things get out of control when Wheeljack and Ratchet are both seriously injured in an accident. Can First Aid save them? Will Sideswipe take on a new career? And in all the chaos will Bumblebee figure out Jazz's

Comments

[wicked3659]

*chuckling to self* These two must be tired of this charade ^_^;; I'm exhausted just watching them play it out. I want to scream at everyone that they're bonded shake them both and tell them it's okay. Doesn't seem like things could get any worse in any case ^_^;;

[taralynden]

Oh Jazz and Prowl are very much sick of this charade, Jazz in particular. It's tiring, it's frustrating and it's sparkbreaking.

As for whether things could get any worse, just watch out for the upcoming sequel where the secret does slip out and let me know what you think ;)

[peacewish]

I know that these two are playing the world's longest and most cutthroat game of improv ever, and maybe they're more accustomed to this unending charade, but would it kill them to talk things over just a little more on the private comms? Seriously, boys, TALKING. I hear it works wonders, and leaves your significant other somewhat less than baffled when you pretend to have a brain seizure in the arms.

I'm completely lost on why Prowl is faking his way into the medbay, btw. Sometimes Prowl is too smart for me. I'll have to wait for the follow up explanation on that one.

Poor Pinpoint. Life's never easy for the mundane.

Get some sleep, Jazz! Wheeljack almost saw through the window!

[taralynden]

the world's longest and most cutthroat game of improv ever
Yup, that pretty much covers it. They are very accustomed to it, but it doesn't mean they like it, and Jazz in particular has had enough right now.

would it kill them to talk things over just a little more on the private comms?
Well that depends on what you think might happen if they get caught? I think they're so caught up in hiding it that there isn't actually much there to hide. Meanwhile, they confuse each other on a regular basis.

Hopefully the explanation in the next chapter cleared up what Prowl was thinking, because at the end of this chapter Jazz didn't have a clue. Not that the explanation did much for his temper.

You know I think that's the first bit of sympathy any of my readers have shown for my poor OC. They're not all evil! (Truth be told, if I'd remembered he was there when I started reposting this I might have removed him, but he's been in this story since 2009 - he's just part of the furniture, I kinda forgot he was there...)

Get some sleep, Jazz!