Everything Rose Ever Wanted to Know About Time Lords, and Apparently Wasn't Afraid to Ask - Lesson 5

[tardislullabye]

Title: Everything Rose Wanted to Know About Time Lords, and Apparently Wasn't Afraid to Ask

Lesson: Five

Author: Gail R. Delaney

Series: The Unseen and In Between

Genre: Romance, Touch of Angst here

Setting: Throughout Series Two beginning after Age of Steel, with references back to other stories in the series, ie: Two Steps Forward

Comments

[slvrcrystalc]

I think... Susan made the blanket. It seems like something she'd do. ^.^ Cute Earth-human fun.

I love the Perfect Rose and Forever Rose that the TARDIS uses. So much emotion in them from the Doctor and the TARDIS.

[tardislullabye]

My favorite line from the Child!TARDIS in this piece is the "Pretty Rose not feeling very pretty?"

HA HA HA

Just thought it was cute.

Hmmm... Susan making the blanket... interesting thought... but I'm not giving anything away. Not yet

[slvrcrystalc]

Oh yes! That line was hilarious. ^.^ Poor Pretty Rose.

[thistwilight]

Oh wow. ):
So sad.
Good job.

[tardislullabye]

thank you very much

[scubagurl22]

I absolutly loved this piece! The TARDIS manifestations are my favorite bits of your stories and that combined with sweet Doctor and the story was just perfect. Will we see the Little Girl TADRIS again? Please?

[tardislullabye]

Oh, yes... I'm sure she'll be around again. She's become so integral to their lives now, that I can't. And she's so much a piece of his past.

So, yes... she'll be back

[ladychi]

I have to say. My favorite chapters are when the TARDIS manifests herself in the form of that little girl. It adds something mystical and unique to your stories, and the way you write her dialogue always leaves me with a smile on my face.

You can just hear the Doctor's angst, by the way. In several lines of this chapter. Personal favorites are:

The Doctor's head dropped forward, his shoulders dropped. "Can't you just... please. Don't you understand what it does to me to remember?"

And:

“Will you ever listen to me?” he asked with a tone that said he didn’t expect an answer. He scooped her up in his arms again, and carried her to the bedroom, nudging the door open with his foot. “Stay in bed. It’s not that hard a concept. Stay in bed, get some rest, and get better.”

It's not hard to gather that he needs her to get better -- that he needs her.

I'm infinitely curious about this blanket! I hope the next chapter comes out as quickly as the last few have!

[tardislullabye]

Thank you very much. I love Child TARDIS. She's so fun. And thank you for the compliments.

And I'm writing as fast as I can. LOL I try to write in order as much as I can... but, my mind is working more on future stories. :-) I have the next chapter of this story written, but the timing isn't write yet.

So, soon... I promise.

[eyliena]

awesome. that was truly wonderful. I gotta watch for more of your fics - course, I have to go read the rest of this one, first. I loved this so much

[tardislullabye]

Thank you. Every story you need is found in the links on my LJ... and they're listed in order for your convenience. :-)

More soon. :-)