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taricalmcacil

Necessity Chapter 1

Jul 29, 2008 21:37

Title: Necessity
Author: Tari Calmcacil (Tarica)
Rating: FRM
Genre: Angst/Hurt/Comfort
Summary: An alternate ending to season 4, starting with episode 4x12, Don't Ever Change.

A/N: Okay, so I was PO'd about how 4x12 turned out. I decided to do something about it. Most of they dialogue here comes directly from the episode, but it will start to veer away ( Read more... )

fanfiction, necessity, house

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taricalmcacil July 30 2008, 02:11:29 UTC

Yeah, I'm hoping I'll have broken away by the end of chapter two, but I need the episode's dialogue to build on the emotions so I can move the story the way I want it.

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taricalmcacil July 30 2008, 02:18:21 UTC

That's actually where I got the idea to write it like this, instead of randomly jumping in somewhere after the ep. I love "Of A Thursday", really wish Sydaedalus would finish it. I thought it would be better to get into the emotions this way than to randomly have them with no explanation.

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dreamsofspike July 30 2008, 02:46:29 UTC

great start, hon :) like it very much so far...wonder what house is gonna do with his newfound knowledge :) so far you've got them all very much in character :) looking forward to more :)