Fic: She Falls Apart - One

[tashamiller2k]

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[tashamiller2k]

Thanks bb. I really wanted to look at how things would impact Selena after what happened. At least Taylor's there with a coffee and a hug.

[wontutakemeaway]

Thank you so much for giving us this preview!

“Is it your usual, oh they won’t let me be a great big homo whine again?”

Best. Line. Ever! XD

[wontutakemeaway]

Oh, I was so much in love with that line that I totally forgot to mention:

After the Prologue, I wasn't sure where Demi was standing, with her feelings and everything... I didn't even know if she had any, actually :P But I really liked it that in this chapter you get to see glimpses of what's running through her mind and that she DOES care.

[tashamiller2k]

Thanks for the comments :)

Originally I wanted to explore things from Selena's perspective but in writing it it's become very much about what both girls are going through.

I'm glad you like the line. I like Michael :P

[spashley20]

lmao love that last line by michael. hilarious.

great update, and poor selena :( i'm glad taylor was tehre for her

[tashamiller2k]

I like Michael, he's an important part of Demi's 'New Life'

Thanks for reading and commenting :D

[5x5barista]

awww selena! i can empathize... i hope they are able to talk things out before her touring starts up again! great story :)

[tashamiller2k]

Thanks :D

[therealval]

ohh this is interesting. :)
how old are they.? like 21-22.?
cant wait till ya unfold all thd madness.

[tashamiller2k]

Thanks for reading, and commenting.

I haven't really got a specific age in mind for the girls, but yea I am thinking early to mid 20's