Fic: She Falls Apart - Nine

[tashamiller2k]

Comments

[spashley20]

omg omg omg omg. for a SECOND i was like OMG I LOVE DEMI.

and then: As Demi’s fingers finally slide inside of Selena she can’t help but think how much more amazing it is with Selena being so responsive to her actions.

that came crashing down and i remember what a monster she was!

i so know i'm gonna feel heartbroken when selena remembers. she's going to be in so much pain :( i kinda hope she never remembers.

[tashamiller2k]

There had to be something to remind the reader of what Demi has done in the past. I think she's made such a transition there had to be that reminder.

[krackel20]

ugh my god. i just really want demi to get what's coming to her in the end.

omg, i cannot wait for everything to just come in to place.

*doing happy dance because of update*

[tashamiller2k]

*joins in happy dance*

Only a couple more parts left to go and it all wraps up.
I'm looking forward to seeing what people think of the ending :)

[pathurr19]

happy for them :D gahhhhh! love it!

[kittyspotneko]

oh... no.. you didnt.. you did. aw man you suck, you haaaaad to let it fall, JUST as I was getting comfortable thinking you were gonna forgo this part lol you suuuuck.

loved it!!! well all of it minus the ending part of this chapter. more please. oh can you make the bad part quick? i wanna get back to happy xP