community fic! part two

[tashlae]

Her most pressing problem right now is that there’s nowhere to go.  Nothing is open at half past seven on a Saturday; the only people awake are those who go for early morning runs and walk their dogs.  She could go to Starbucks but she doesn’t want to pay three bucks for tea just because she isn’t supposed to have coffee, and the thought of

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[wr1t3rbl0ck3d]

So, um, this is kind of somewhat mostly brain-wrinklingly life changing, in a major way. Like, the first thing I do when I get up tomorrow morning will be instant messaging my J/B-loving friend and asking her, in the name of all things holy, why she hasn't seen, commented, and told me about this fic.

I seriously think this has to be one of the most amazing things I've ever read and that's not because it's five in the morning and my battery is warning me some serious shit is going to go down if I don't plug it into the charger soon. I read a lot of amazing stuff, but I think I'd list this in the top five with that mind-blowing Alice 2009 fic and the first Harmony I ever read that didn't suck balls.

The way you write this is kind of abstract and at the same time real. I love the snapshot style of writing (I use it too much and it's become a crutch but damn if it doesn't punch you in the stomach with white-hot intensity). This pulses with an energy that I spend so much time trying to harvest and never quite manage to get. It's simple

[jdphoenix]

Oh! Oh! This! This is just! Gah! This is like my most secret fandom dream come true! I want to tell you all the amazing things I loved about this but there were far too many. (And I hate when people say that but it's true.) I'll try anyway though

[anr]

awww, this was lovely! I like that you didn't have it be all perfect immediately, that they had to work through issues in the beginning. Great read! :)