Devil to Blackmail (fanfic, oneshot)

[tashlliya]

Series: Eyeshield 21____________________Pairing: Hiruma x Mamori

Title: Devil to Blackmail__________________Author: ReiraRhapsody here, TashaHex elsewhere

Rating: T______________________________Type: OneShot_____________________________Word count: 1490

Warnings: Hiruma as usual, fluffish a bit, NO BETA

Timeline: Deimon, year after the Christmas

Comments

[cherry_tiger]

Hahahaha! Well isn't Mamori amazing at stopping everyone from doing any form of blackmail? XD And Mamori kissing Hiruma to stop him? That's even more amazing. Lol! A few spelling errors here and there, but it was definitely a fun read. ^^

[tashlliya]

Hehe, glad you liked it!
I blame you for giving me a HiruMamo overdose :p I actually wrote this right after commenting on your cute stories.
Mamori is a good girl and I guess desperate times call for desperate measures ^_^
Damn the spelling... That sneaky spell check told me everything's fine, the nerve XD I'll find a beta person again =)

[dayofcaligula]

That was funny!

[tashlliya]

Mission accomplished then! Glad you liked it and thanks for commenting :D

[honey_bee89]

Sorry it took me a while to comment. I haven't had much peace to read. XD Anyway, lovely job on the story! I love the thought of Mamori protecting everyone from being bullied and blackmailed - even Hiruma! That's so like her to do that. And her plan to distract him and everyone worked like a charm. I love it. =D

I read that you used a spell check. Unfortunately, they only correct spelling errors and not word errors. Like, you wrote "dough" instead of "though" and it didn't correct it. It happens. That's why I have to read through my stories a few times to catch these things. XD You know, someone told me once about "NaturalReader", which is a program that reads out what you write down. I'm not going to tell you to download it because I don't know if it's 100% safe yet (I'm a paranoid person. XD), but you could copy and paste sentences into the preview box, if you'd like. That's what I do. =)

[tashlliya]

I guess this is anti blackmail story XD With Hiruma, and Suzuna, Mamori always has to be on guard!
Once again, sorry about my English "sighs" I do read my stories more then few times and try to correct them but...

Thanks for the program link, I had some fun with it and I find it very useful but to tell you the truth, I wouldn't have heard the difference between dough/though =( I'll try not to make same mistake again, that's all I'll promise ^-^

Oh, and thanks for the code! I'll probably try to do some of the other prompts too, we'll see

[honey_bee89]

Hm. You're right, you can't really hear the difference between "dough" and "though" with that program... Well, when all else fails, look to the wonderful dictionary. For quick and easy access, it's a permanent part of my tab bar. lol. I'm always typing words in it because I'm always paranoid about using the wrong word. XD

I noticed I messed up with the 'blackmail' banner so I re-posted it. Here's the new code:

http://i365.photobucket.com/albums/oo91/Honey-Bee89/HM%20-%20Prompt%20of%20the%20Month/PotM-2010-092.png?t=1285915735" />

Sorry about this inconvenience. =(

[tashlliya]

Thanks for the link and code =)

[bar_ohki]

There's just something so very thrilling about Hiruma getting kissed to shut him up.

[tashlliya]

"waves" Glad you like XD
Mamori's mind was in "protect fast" mode so all is well that ends well hehe