As birds have it (fanfic, oneshot)

[tashlliya]

Series: Eyeshield 21____________________Pairing: Hiruma x Mamori

Title: As birds have it____________________Author: ReiraRhapsody here, TashaHex elsewhere

Rating: T______________________________Type: OneShot_____________________________Word count: 2020

Warnings: Suggestive, slight OOCness

Timeline: post series, 2nd year of Saikyoudai

Summary:

Comments

[bar_ohki]

Very amusing. I love how Hiruma doesn't quite get it unless someone points it out to him. And the ending conversation with Mamori is absolutely amusing.

[tashlliya]

Thanks! Glad you liked it! =) I was worried about this fic since I barely squeezed it out and it feels so rushed :/

Yeah, he's got too much football on his mind I guess... and I imagine a lot of their conversations ending up like this XD

[bar_ohki]

Well, lol, when I finally finish my story it'll be a very different interpretation of the prompt.

[tashlliya]

Oh, mai! So looking forward to it, I know you do wonders XD

[cherry_tiger]

Hahahaha! I LOVE your concept of nesting! And clueless Hiruma is hilarious! XD Great job on the prompt! ^^

[tashlliya]

Hehe, happy it made you laugh! Nesting rules XD I can imagine Mamori having over-clean days and Hiruma not understanding her. Thanks for the kind comment =)

[immortalizepain]

Haha... Hiruma how clueless can you be. I really did crack up in the conversation between Hiruma and Musashi. Guys, seriously?

Love it!!!

DAMN FUNNY!

[wacky_jam0902]

this is such a great story! perfectly fills like the start of spring.. spring cleaning is clearly in the air and so is mating.. XD
i wish you the best of luck for the story competition in DA.!! XD

-mei vir d. ripper