Holy shit that is actually a cohesive poem. I am starting to think that this could be a legitimate art poetry format. Like dadaist poetry, except with a bit more structure. LET'S DO IT.
I know, I was shocked! Especially the last stanza. Though I liked my use of the line from Crazy In Love as a standalone(!) :D
I think we should do it, and then submit our shiny new poems to all university poetry mags as Serious Art. They'd love it, whilst pretending not to, and would spend ages trying to figure out what it all meant, haha.
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I think we should do it, and then submit our shiny new poems to all university poetry mags as Serious Art. They'd love it, whilst pretending not to, and would spend ages trying to figure out what it all meant, haha.
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