"Together," L/Light (PG-13)

Aug 17, 2006 15:42

...This is one of those fics that could keep on being edited forever, and as long as it's sitting there on my computer I probably won't be able to resist working on it. And I really need to be working on school right now. So, here, have a fic!

Sorry if any of the transitions seem kind of jerky or nonexistent; I deleted about 1700 scenes from this ( Read more... )

l/light, death note

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pedosaurus August 18 2006, 22:26:57 UTC
That was fabulous. <3

I think a sequel is in order. :D

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climbatize August 21 2006, 21:17:48 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. ^^

But knowing me, it'll be half a year before the sequel's even finished, eh heh... >>

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i_arienette August 18 2006, 23:20:20 UTC
I kind of, like, wailed at the end.

But it was lovely, and much more canon than the fluff I play around with in my head, teehee.

Wonderfully written; I would certainly enjoy any potential sequels!

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climbatize August 21 2006, 21:25:00 UTC
...I really hate to say I'm glad you were wailing, because that makes me seem like some kind of horrible sadist. XD; So thanks for reading and commenting, then!

I actually wrote this because I have a hard time viewing L and Light in a relationship, just because of who they are. So I started thinking, when would it work out? And it turned into this. ^^;

Anyway, I'm glad you liked it!

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taiyoukai143 August 19 2006, 01:26:35 UTC
That really seems to be the most possible reasoning I suppose. If Light weren't Kira and if he had met L under different circumstances then I really do believe the two would make a perfect match. oO;; Two geniuses though, yeesh, how much smarter can you get? ^^ Lol

It makes me sad though, Light wishes to destroy L as Kira but if Light were simply Light he would find himself 'falling' for Ryuuzaki. The world is sometimes a crule cruel thing, especially if you want a certain couple to be together. XD Lol

I loved the fic though and if you post more I shall definately read more. ^^

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climbatize August 21 2006, 21:27:33 UTC
Oh, definitely - if Light weren't Kira, he would get along so well with L. It's kind of sad when you think about it.

But yeah, I have trouble seeing Kira!Light falling for L... it just makes much more sense when he's lost his memories.

Thanks for commenting! ♥

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asidian August 21 2006, 12:19:34 UTC
This was fantastic. Just clever and in character and wonderfully poignant. That last line really hauls back and punches you in the stomach- in a good way.

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climbatize August 21 2006, 21:46:10 UTC
Thanks. ^^ I'm glad you think so - and that the last line still worked after I'd added so many scenes.

And this is totally off topic, but icon love!

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climbatize August 26 2006, 15:10:56 UTC
Thanks so much for the comment! ^^ I'm really glad you can see how it'd be possible. (Misa's amazing, though! I couldn't have done everything she's accomplished.)

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