Echoes of Summer - Chapter Thirty-Seven: Burn Gold

[tasogareban]

Disclaimer: Neither Doctor Who nor any characters, items or materials of any kind pertaining to Doctor Who or the Whoniverse belong to me. I’m just looking for a good time. Hee. Trying them out for a bit, see how they fit.

Plot Summary: He was left with his lips against her jaw, her figure pressed to him as if she belonged there. One of many moments

Comments

[zazie11]

“What have you been hiding from me?” he asked her softly, not unkindly. His breath caught as she raised her mouth yet again to his thumb, as she caught it between her lips gently.

She opened her eyes at his halting question. “Nothing anymore.” And at her words he did not imagine the small scrape of her tongue against the pad of his thumb, his eyes trained on her lips and lost there.

YES. Just ... yes! :D

You are killing me!

[zazie11]

I've been reading this story from the very beginning and I can't handle the suspence anymore!

Great job! I love your style. :)

Re: You are killing me!

[tasogareban]

I don't know who you are but THANKS! LOL! I'm...going to keep you in suspense some more though because...Brat was right all along. I'm just bad... >.>

[tasogareban]

LOL! You like the tongue thing, you naughty girl you, DON'T YOU!?!?

[kilodalton]

Oh. My. God.

I love this, it is gorgeous, I love how you slowly unfold this scene in a mix of angst, foreboding, romance and sweetness and wrap it up at the end in a very romantic package. There are not many writers who could convincingly pull off everything you've packed in here and draw it out as rivetingly as you do (and, I have a feeling, the continuation in the next chapter).

[tasogareban]

Ah ty! This was actually one of the very first chapters I had written for this fic which is why it's so emotional and ethereal, I guess. I was completely in love with the OTP that it was all I dreamt about so when I wrote it, it had all of my feelings behind it. Then I started to write the full on angst. Woohoo! :)

[tasogareban]

I DO have it out for you! For ALL of you! Mwa-hahahahahahahaha! I'm the biggest tease in the world!

Ask my bus driver. *glances toward Brat innocently*

[bratflorida]

ROFL!!! Ohhh, that's right Cass, poke 'em with a stick! *grabs lawn chair and sits back to watch the oncoming revolt*

[kilodalton]

Omg I read the next chapter on fanfiction.net and I LOVE IT!!!!!! I know it's not posted here yet, but I just wanted to say it is incredible and perfect and I adore it!

[tasogareban]

OMG! ROFL! I JUST put it up. Work kept getting in the way, lol! And thanks! For reading and for coming back and reviewing, lol! That's so awesome of you! :)