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Bordello: Chapter Five

Jul 14, 2012 21:58

Title: Bordello
Pairing: Matt/Brian
Rating: M
Summary: Brian is a prostitute, Matt is a man who's intentions weren't to fall for the beautiful man.
Disclaimer: These lovely men own themselves, the plot comes from me though.
Author's note: Thanks for all the lovely reviews, and thanks to anyone who's honestly enjoying this. (:

( Chapter Five )

Comments 11

lycanthrop13 July 15 2012, 05:54:05 UTC

jealous,jealous,jealous that's what Caden is. yay Matt and brian finally get some sexy time

taste_the_syn July 15 2012, 06:03:17 UTC

Haha :D Thanks for reading.

sozonnohime_09 July 15 2012, 13:57:20 UTC

Love it. :)

taste_the_syn July 15 2012, 18:24:53 UTC

Thank :D

sozonnohime_09 July 16 2012, 13:09:54 UTC

Welcome. :)

reading_roach July 16 2012, 03:31:51 UTC

I think Caden is a very interesting character

taste_the_syn July 16 2012, 03:41:49 UTC

I'm glad that you like him (: Thanks for reading.

khaoscore July 16 2012, 19:42:13 UTC

This one wasn't as long as I expected it to be. Which is still cool though. I know people have lives and can't write billions of words all the time but at least you wrote something to continue this along. I haven't posted anything story-wise in ages so I can't talk about how long something is.

Anyway, great as usual. Looking forward to more. :)

taste_the_syn July 17 2012, 00:13:20 UTC

Haha, well it's short because I actually have 2 parts of this written so far, and I when I post a chapter I just take 1/3 from one part and post it as a chapter. So chapter 6 will be the last chapter of part two...I hope that makes sense XD

zeevee_ocd July 17 2012, 21:31:39 UTC

So I read this all just yesterday, and I love it! I'm not a huge fan of Bratt, (my personal favorite would have to be Brian/Zacky), but this is awesome. The way they interact is just so... right. Yeah, this is how'd you expect the relationship between them to be if Brian was a whore and Matt a client. (Well, not yet, but still. And I'm not the only one who thinks about how a relationship between the two in a situation like this would be, right? o.O)

And Caden is so jealous. You can straight out tell. Poor dude, Brian wants Matt. Too bad.

Well... that was a pretty long comment (for me, at least). But I figured I'd make up for not commenting earlier. This is a super amazing story, keep it up. :)

taste_the_syn July 18 2012, 01:58:39 UTC

Thank you so much! :D
Caden is a bit jealous yeah, but mainly protective, and he doesn't want to lose Brian.
Thanks for reading! The next chapter will be up as soon as possible! <3