Bordello: Chapter Eleven

[taste_the_syn]

Title: Bordello
Pairing: Matt/Brian
Rating: M
Summary: Brian is a prostitute, Matt is a man who's intentions weren't to fall for the beautiful man.
Disclaimer: These lovely men own themselves, the plot comes from me though.
Author's note: This chapter took way too long to update, I know, I'm so sorry. But school started and I haven't had the time to

Comments

[sozonnohime_09]

Hmm... am glad that Caden basically let him go... or kicked him out. :) Just so he could be with Matt.

But wonder if Caden will end up having someone go after Brian--or if Brian doesn't have to worry about Caden coming after him?

Love it. :)

[taste_the_syn]

Thanks (:

[zeevee_ocd]

Before I tell you how much I loved this chapter, I have a bit of concrit. It was when Brian left to go sit in a lawn chair to talk to Matt. When Matt told Brian the contract wasn't legit, it said Brian jumped up from his bed.

I thought he was on a lawn chair?

But other than that, this chapter was great. Caden better not try and come after Brian. But I know he is, I mean, the man is crazy. Matt is there for Bri though, which means if Caden tries anything, there will be ass kicking.

Can't wait for the next chapter! Although I know how much school gets in the way of writing, so I'll wait as long as the next update will take.<3

[taste_the_syn]

Crap! aha, I gotta go fix that!
Thanks for reading!

[taste_the_syn]

Fixed it! Thanks for pointing that out! I guess I kept picturing Brian in his room when I was writing it! Haha.

[zeevee_ocd]

No problem, happens to everyone. Especially if Brian is on your mind. ;)

If you need a beta (even though your writing hardly ever has mistakes), I'll be glad to help. :) just message me and I'll give you my e-mail.

[khaoscore]

Yay! Freedom for now! There's no way that Caden is going to let Brian go just like that. He's going to be a dick until he dies. Not saying you'd kill him or anything but if you did, I'd have no regrets about saying that. :D

[taste_the_syn]

Oh you never know :D
Thanks for reading!

[ext_1314266]

Oh my dear fucking lord, you don't know how excited I was to see it was updated. Ugh, I loved it. I mean, there's no fucking way Caden will let him go that fast or easy but I'm still so excited for Brian and Matt. ^-^ Can't wait for more!

[taste_the_syn]

Thanks so much darling. You're such a devoted reader, and that means a lot. Thank you (:

[ext_1314266]

Oh, and one more thing: there's a sentence in there that says "But would Marcus come after him?" I could have missed something but I don't remember a Marcus lol ^^

[taste_the_syn]

Haha, I knew I would put his name in there sooner or later. Haha, he's another character like Caden from another one of my other stories. Very much like Caden.