It'll get better, I swear

[tastelikeapples]

Okay, so I had a lot of time to plot things out in my head today. Which was fun. And it kept me entertained. Yay for NaNoWriMo.

I still don't like my charcters much, though.

Today's wallpaper is http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/17610051/

And onto the next part.

Comments

[kwishin]

Wee! New long post from On-ni. Makes me mad though, that you have so many words. Very bitter.

I enjoyed it! Very much so. And there's coherency and plot. Most admirable. And the right mixture of humor and seriousness and what not.

...Now I have to go back to my own writing!!

[tastelikeapples]

You don't think he's angsting too much? I'm starting to feel like somebody really needs to shake Greg and tell him to get over things. Never mind that he's got some pretty valid reasons for being a whiny pain in the ass.

[aestusargenteus]

Nah, he's totally validated in being angsty. Plus he's the age where they just are naturally. It works. And this is really good! Yours is much less rough than mine.

I'm bitter about your word count as well. Just so you know...

[tastelikeapples]

Aren't you supposed to be past the whole angsty thing at seventeen? Or do you just think you are?

Bah. I liked yours.