I'm the last one to post today

Nov 03, 2005 23:12

But I'm not a loser! ^_^ (Just teasing, phoenixeiros! Hee ( Read more... )

nanowrimo 2005, brother's keeper

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aestusargenteus November 4 2005, 08:31:31 UTC
See, this is me hating your word count!

But I love this! The sparring really comes across well. And the two are funny :D

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tastelikeapples November 4 2005, 15:06:42 UTC
Does it? I was worried that it wasn't translating from in my head well enough. *Makes face.* Action stuff is hard to write.

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phoenixeiros November 5 2005, 01:48:07 UTC
This is me hating your word count as well.

I so love the "goodwill/Stockholm Syndrom" phrase. That's awesome.

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tastelikeapples November 5 2005, 02:23:18 UTC
Heeeey. No hating.

I'm glad you liked it. I did too. ^_^

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