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tastelikeapples

In Constellated Wars - Part Five

Nov 16, 2009 12:32

Okay, it is my lunch hour, so I should go out and get something to eat, but I am not actually hungry. (I don't doubt that I'm going to regret this decision in a couple of hours, but whatever. I have a granola bar and funky Korean snack food. I'll live.)

NaNo is probably a better use of my lunch hour, anyway.

( Part Five, in which Thierry and Aubrey 'go sight-seeing' and Thierry realizes that pretty much no one in Altera ever flat out says what they mean. )

nanowrimo09, in constellated wars

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phoenixeiros November 20 2009, 00:48:01 UTC

Hmm. I'm liking the build up. It seems like its still all in the set-up stage though, I can't imagine how this is all going to be wrapped up in 50,000 words, but perhaps you shall surprise me.

I do like all the terminology, and the culture, you do world-building so well.

tastelikeapples November 20 2009, 01:02:50 UTC

*Flails.* I KNOW. I am so not going to be able to be able to wrap this up in 50,000 words.

So. No surprises here.

But, hey, at least this time I have something actually resembling a plot this time, as opposed to last year, in which I sort of made it up in the last two parts.